Headshot in Studio - Honest Critiques Please!

I photographed this girl and retouched the image. I would appreciate honest opinion on the expression, lighting as well...
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Thomas

After years without see each other, me and my old friend, we met in my studio in Amsterdam. Lot of fun and some frames...
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Playing around with HSS

Just a small 60x60cm Softbox from above with a SB-800. Shot at 120mm at f3.2 CC are welcome!
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Outdoor natural Headshort

Critiques please....
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Lindsay "Queen of the White Walkers"

It snowed here in Nashville which is a very rare occurrence so I decided to take advantage with my friend Lindsay. I...
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Colour Gels

Created this look using the Profoto OCF Color Effects Gel. First time using it

Joe...

Taken with my 5d mkii, Sigma 24-70 f2.8. Single Pro Master 300ws monolight with the Pro Master deep octabox.

Selfie

Taken with my Nikon D4s through Camranger

My First Headshot of 2017!

I took this using my chalkboard painted poly board in next to a huge window in my studio, with a white poly opposite...
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Tanya

Last weekend photographed this girl. Which photo do you like and what is not?

Some CC would be great!

Hey, here's one from a recent headshot session. I'd love to hear what you think!
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Classic BOOM!

Headshot session i did
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Hi, Greetings from Central Borneo.

Hi, my name is Fery. lives in central boreno - indonesia. I like photography as a hobby. and i want learning more in...
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Alexis Headshot Comments are welcome

Open to comments
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Alopezia 3

To the story with Alopecia and Lisa finally the Headshot
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The Business Man

This was my last Photoshoot showcasing headshots. I'm not sure if I nailed it. It's mostly because of the bushes that's...
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Miss Natalie

This was a previous shoot that happened to be one of the first I had done in a long while. I was coming back from some...
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A couple final shots of 2016

Had a few shots I wanted to finish the year off with

A boy named Sue

Hey there, would love to get cc Fuji Xpro 1, 35mm 1.4 f2.8, 125th, iso 200, westcott apollo orb octa, cactus rf60.
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Luma Frehley

From a recent studio shoot... Comments and Critiques are welcomed...
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