The model and lighting are both beautiful. Great job with the logo, it's simple yet unique.

I do think that you could go easy on the editing; The hair looks "heavy" with the editing, yet there are still plenty of "fly-aways". The eyes look a little glazed over, because of the editing. BUT it's always better to learn how to do less than do more.

A couple other things I've noticed: there's a space between her mouth and her lips (where the makeup starts). Next time, either have her show less lip or extend the color through editing.

Lastly, something about that hand makes it look unnatural/it's coming out of nowhere. Show us a little more of the torso/zoom out just a little more to connect the hand--to the face--to the body.