Lovely photo. 2 thing that would make me enjoy this more are:
1-removing the pink color grading just from her eyes. Then add just a touch of brightness to the iris. Not too much, just enough to grab my attention while scrolling through.
2-Bump the exposure (or maybe just the highlights)on her skin, just a smidge. Part of the beauty of redheads is their ivory complextion.

Obviously I’m being nit picky. Just wanted to give you some feedback.

After looking at your portfolio, I think that this might be unintentionally enderexposed. You may need to lower the brightness on the display that you edit on. My 1st comment was made with the assumption that you were intentionally leaving the image dark to prevent the warm tones from being to overpowering. However, after looking at your portfolio, it appears that you commonly underexposed your photos. Try viewing your images on other displays set to medium brightness to compare how your images look on devices other than your computer. Hopefully this is a helpful comment.