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J Sclafani's picture

Palm

I like the simplicity and lines here. Comments?

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I think I'd like a bit more sharpness to the water drops and I'm curious how it would look with the lines vertical (perhaps because it reminds me of a picture I took not long ago of a fork on a similarly patterned place mat).

Good feedback. Thank you.

Hi J... i do prefer this image to the first two i commented on... i like the lines, shapes and shadows...
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Mike

I like the simplicity but feel the palm needs to be sharper. The diagonal lines do help, making the image more dynamic.

I feel the water droplets detract from the image also.

A sharper image without the water would be a winner for me.

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