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Rob Kass

it's not that cold !

Shooting in the yard trying out a new strobe. Constructive criticism always welcome.

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olivier borgognon's picture
olivier borgognon

I 'd say, some tips could be to relax the model, (create that connection, trust, energy prior to the shoot) make it fun and a laugh, could lead to relaxed expression, maybe eye contact or not, but she looks like she is hyper focused and concentrated to get her pose right.and maybe not cut the feet off.

Just a few tips, to play around with, and if you have fun and feel like it s super natural, it will go both ways.

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Rob Kass olivier borgognon

Thank you Oliver !

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Black Z Eddie .

I'd watch the crops/framing. Currently, there's no negative space at her feet.

Pick a more interesting location other than a blacked-out background and grass. Something like this would probably have been more interesting and fitting:

https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-ksi4WQOrxQ4/XdkZ4wZu7vI/AAAAAAAAQoE/pLna6UIuH...

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Rob Kass Black Z Eddie .

Thanks for the input, I agree, but only so many locations in the back yard. We are going to try to get out elsewhere this weekend. I also just received the 35mm lens that will help with framing/cropping.

Thanks again for the critique.

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