Kamila, christmas time portrait

for the positive: great focus on the eyes, they really draw my focus. I think the simple grey top goes well with the wall for this headshot.

for improvement: I don't think the decorations in the corner contribute enough to the image. if they were on both sides or if this shot wasn't so close-cropped it would work more. I also think that this would look better with her being centered. Her one shoulder looks blurred, and I can't tell if it's motion blur or an optical illusion, but once I saw it I found it distracting. Lastly, her expression almost looks strained like she's been holding the pose too long.

Nice, but a little too...deer in headlights, like, she has no expression, like she might be coming after me...like to harm me. Her hair looks disheveled and she looks like she is seeing through me. He face seems a bit flat. Her eyes do look very nice.