Hi guys, my name is Stanley i'm a french photographer living in Rouen (small cute city). I'd love to get your thoughs on this portrait. I like it because i know very well this person but want to get others opinions ;)
Good use of colour but I would prefer a less profile view or move the key light slightly further from the camera, not much, so we get some more shade on the side of her face. But ideally I'd like to see more of her face, so less profile.
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Interesting lighting. Apart from the light temperature, it almost appears she is looking at a candle. Overall it seems to capture an emotion. On that basis, I really like it.
interesting colors! what bothers me in this shot is the nose cutting the cheek line as well as eye line and farther eye being blurry. Also the light on her other arm is too bright for me, pulling my attention away from the face. I hope I am not too harsh.
Good use of colour but I would prefer a less profile view or move the key light slightly further from the camera, not much, so we get some more shade on the side of her face. But ideally I'd like to see more of her face, so less profile.
Interesting lighting. Apart from the light temperature, it almost appears she is looking at a candle. Overall it seems to capture an emotion. On that basis, I really like it.
interesting colors! what bothers me in this shot is the nose cutting the cheek line as well as eye line and farther eye being blurry. Also the light on her other arm is too bright for me, pulling my attention away from the face. I hope I am not too harsh.