I think it a very good start. For me, and this is entirely personal, I would go more wide aspect ratio if seeking a cinematic feel, say 2.39:1, a favourite of mine to be open and honest. Next, I think she deserves a little work from a MUA and or a little retouching, frequency separation for instance, to help her cope with the dramatic lighting, which is quite cinematic. She has a good face and you have shot her well but she deserves more love to make her a screen godess, bu that is how they all get to be screen godesses.
I think it a very good start. For me, and this is entirely personal, I would go more wide aspect ratio if seeking a cinematic feel, say 2.39:1, a favourite of mine to be open and honest. Next, I think she deserves a little work from a MUA and or a little retouching, frequency separation for instance, to help her cope with the dramatic lighting, which is quite cinematic. She has a good face and you have shot her well but she deserves more love to make her a screen godess, bu that is how they all get to be screen godesses.