Hi Lele, that by the way is our cousin's name too. The first one is excellent. The sultry look and the mysteriousness of the veil give it a cool feel. The second is not so great. The lighting overall looks muted (smorzato). I brought your photo into PS and simply applied the Automatic Contrast to make my point. IF however, this muted look is what you were looking for forgive me.
Hi Lele, that by the way is our cousin's name too. The first one is excellent. The sultry look and the mysteriousness of the veil give it a cool feel. The second is not so great. The lighting overall looks muted (smorzato). I brought your photo into PS and simply applied the Automatic Contrast to make my point. IF however, this muted look is what you were looking for forgive me.
oh yep, it's great too. Thanx for your suggestion :)