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Sunset in Paradise

Hey! This is my first shot at a landscape photograph! I loved the idea of the couple sitting on the dock being silhouetted by the sky. Any feedback and/or comments would be great! Thanks in advance :)

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Looks pretty nice overall, the colors of the sky and water. However, I think it's unfortunate that the rail is so thick that it takes away from the couple quite a bit. If you know this couple, it might have been more interesting to have them sit up on the rail instead...but if you don't know them, well so much for that idea!

Unfortunately, I didn't know the couple. The rail was intended to be a leading line into the photograph but I can see how it got a little muddied up. Sort of looks clunky. I'll make sure I look out for those sorts of things in the future. Thanks, Musashi! I really appreciate the feedback :)

Yes, the couple is not pronounced enough to catch my attention. They almost appear to be part of the deck itself. Love the colors.