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1.9 - "Needs Work" 

This photo makes me thing about repetition. Repetition of stories, of feelings for the one who visit their loved ones.

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i love the idea of it but i think this image would look even more impactfull if you would have lowerd the camera and converted this into black and white. You could have caught the mood like this better than in this bright and vibrant location

Thanks. I totally agree with you. It's good to receive feedback. Makes us all improve in what we love to do. Thanks again!

I totaly agree, there is always room to grow so keep on exploring Ruben :)

I'm thinking of shooting the back of the head stones. That way the names are blank but the sun is lighting the marble. That would remove the individuality of the names and make the markers universal.

Good idea. Repetition will become less distracting without the names

I like the concept, but for me the lighting/time of day was what let me down. The blown leaf draws the eye and all the names are in shaow while it looks lit from almost direct overhead.

Thanks for all your tips. I'll keep pushing myself to give my best