I think the idea is there but i feel a bit conflicted. I love the reflection of the house in the pool, but i feel the image is really top heavy. my original thought was if you lifted the camera up so that we saw more of the sky that the image would feel more balanced, but that would cut off the reflection. The shadows are really dark and the house feels almost blown out. My eye gets drawn to the white shed to the right and the barbecue i think it is? I would have loved to see this as a twilight shot, with the party lights lit to emphasize the entertainment area and keep my eye there.