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2.18 - "Needs Work" 

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There was an idea here but it hasn't come off. The figure in the b/g is a major distraction, adding nothing to the shot. He can't be simply cropped out because that would also crop out the smoke, whch is a key element.

The highlights, shoulder and scalp, should have been knocked back and a tad more exposure on the face and hand ...