Portrait of Lidia, daughter to one of my customers. Image shot with a Sony A72 a couple years ago, great model, always happy. Lighting was one Profoto flash from the right side with a medium sized softbox plus a sidelight from the left with a black backdrop, not much of editing except the normal tweks in the basic panel
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Not a fan of the horizontal crop. With the black backdrop, it just makes it a floating head. The composition also detracts from it because you have the subject in the center of the frame. That makes for an uninteresting image that overshadows the expression, which is what I'm guessing was your main focal point.