Fiance at the Lourve - Looking for critique

I'm super new to photography. Just bought a camera a few months back and I've been greatly enjoying scratching the surface of the mass of knowledge there is out there.

This was my first time going out with the intention of doing "a shoot" and not just snapping photos. I'd love all of the opinions and critiques you great people can offer. General opinions welcome, but constructive criticism would be awesome! Thank y'all in advance!

Edit:
Apparently I'm supposed to include gear.
Sony a9
Sony 24-70 2.8
Godox XPro Controller
Godox 860something-or-other speedlight on a tripod.
Don't remember the settings
Weak photoshop skills ;)

Whole setup fits in my travel backpack.