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Dining Room at Sunset. Taliesin West
Evening just after sunset at Taliesin West. Scottsdale, Arizona. View of the dining room & bell tower.
Paige's booth portrait
Recently, I taught an Off Camera Flash class. Paige was my model for the class. We were outdoors but it started to rain. Luckily, a nearby restaurant let us conduct the class in their dining room.
Raining again
Night, on a street from Bucharest
Paige's booth portrait
Recently, I taught an Off Camera Flash class. Paige was my model for the class. We were outdoors but it started to rain. Luckily, a nearby restaurant let us conduct the class in their dining room.
3 Comments
Hi Alex,
Image 1 - i like tje feel of the sgot but i feel that it is too subdued for my taste and imo can be a bit brighter...
Image 2 - in this one again i geel that tje contrast between the bright white flower against the pitch black is too stark for my taste...
Regards,
Mike
Hi Mike,
Many thanks for your comments
I like the low key image (the first one). I find that the small bits of white in the left bottom corner of the pack could be darkened out.
In the second image, I'm not so sure about the composition and placement although I do like the shark contrast