Took these on a recent trip to Hawai'i. Any suggestions are greatly appreciated - particularly on post. Couldn't decide on which composition I liked between #2 and #3, so figured I'd get some feedback. Thanks!
Took these on a recent trip to Hawai'i. Any suggestions are greatly appreciated - particularly on post. Couldn't decide on which composition I liked between #2 and #3, so figured I'd get some feedback. Thanks!
I like the 3rd and 4th, focus is funky on the first one.
Thanks for the feedback Francisco!
No 4 has great framing and looks great as a pano. There's a good leading line in no 1, but the focus is lost in the distance with no real subject plus the ocean pulls focus away from the direction of the line. Also, check your horizons, they don't look level, but in can be hard to tell with the shape of the islands. May need to correct the lens distortion in post as well.
Thanks David! I see what you're saying about the first one. You're right, not a strong subject. I actually have a version of this without the ocean too (below), but I thought that without a strong singular focus it added a little extra element. The more obvious shot at this location would be something in the other direction towards the ocean, but I wanted to see if I could make this side work. Thanks again for your thoughts, definitely helpful!