Adarsh Sharma May 21, 2019 - 8:16 am

Yosemite National Park

Hi all,
I am new here. Uploading few of my pictures from my recent trip to yosemite national park. Any feedback to improve (composition, post processing or anything else) is highly appreciated.

Thanks.

8 Comments

Francisco B May 21, 2019 - 8:33 am

I think your post work is great, and compositionally I dig the 3rd shot. The first two are nice as well, you just have to be a little more cognizant of creating leading lines and the foreground being too busy.

How did you go about creating the long exposure in the first shot?

Adarsh Sharma May 21, 2019 - 10:08 am

Francisco B

Thanks for your inputs. I used 10 stop ND filter with tokina 11-20mm lens for long exposure.

Ruth Carll May 21, 2019 - 2:31 pm

All three are very well done! Great series.

Is that ice on the water in the foreground on the first one?

Great work!!

joseph cole May 21, 2019 - 3:55 pm

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all very nice compositions.. editing is about personal taste for me i would want to get more mood out of the picture for me clean shots are nice but don't convey anything ...for example..use the light and shadows guide the viewers eye through the shot rather than the eye being bombarded all at once

Adarsh Sharma May 22, 2019 - 5:41 am

joseph cole

Thanks Joseph for your comments..

Ruth Carll May 22, 2019 - 7:31 am

joseph cole

Agreed - although this is a tad too much vignette for me. :) I am still curious about what is one the water in the foreground of the first image. I would actually crop that off as I think it looks like oil? Whatever it is, it is distracting. Overall - nice work!