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2.17 - "Needs Work" 

I actually lit my head on fire

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lol nice, did you use a propan butan mixture wth soap? Planing something simmular, but I`m not totally sure yet on what to use to light myself up. A response would really help me. thanks!

Yeah! I used butan water and soap! good luck!

the flame and such is well captured.
I would probably do more with the pose and expresion.

but the main thing is the background.
The wood and shed type feel is nice, a lot of nice detail there and nice leading lines.

But... the light on the left.. the kayak, whatever the thing is in the top left, the flower blanket.. the grey thing (pool?). the black rack.. it is all distracting, so clean up. Or put things in there that add to the story. Old tools, cans, things like that.