0 0 Tom Orliczek April 4, 2017 Light painting + compositing in PS. Maybe some advice of Pro's Hi foks a try to play with flashes i try some light painting and my final result is poor.. Have anyone some tip for me? :-/ Shot with 6D + 17-40 F4 L Log in or register to post comments 4 Comments Agnieszka Jakubowicz April 4, 2017 The light is not bad. It's the composition that you need to rethink. 1 0 Tom Orliczek April 5, 2017 Agnieszka Jakubowicz what is wrong with composition 0 0 Agnieszka Jakubowicz April 5, 2017 Tom Orliczek For one it is not balanced. Things are falling to one side, there is no clearly defined path for they eye or a focal interest... 2 0 Eric Lucero April 6, 2017 I agree with Agnieszka. Try getting a little tighter on the shot. Also the light is very even over everything so nothing to focus on. Try to make the light look more like it is coming from the window then falling off toward the table. 1 0
The light is not bad. It's the composition that you need to rethink.
what is wrong with composition
For one it is not balanced. Things are falling to one side, there is no clearly defined path for they eye or a focal interest...
I agree with Agnieszka. Try getting a little tighter on the shot. Also the light is very even over everything so nothing to focus on. Try to make the light look more like it is coming from the window then falling off toward the table.